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The national privacy board fined a popular fitness app 40 million yuan on Tuesday, the heaviest sanction handed down so far under the data protection rules, saying that the company had failed to obtain proper consent before sharing users' location histories with advertisers.

国家个人信息监管机构周二对一款热门健身应用开出 4000 万元罚单，这是数据保护条例实施以来作出的最重处罚；该机构表示，这家公司在与广告商共享用户位置记录之前，未取得适当同意。

金额加 the heaviest sanction handed down so far under …：描述“史上最重”的通用骨架，saying that 补充理由。

The port has held its place as the province's busiest grain outlet, with shipments climbing to 4.2 million tonnes last year, reflecting steady demand from inland mills despite a difficult harvest.

该港口稳居全省最繁忙的粮食出口地，去年货运量攀升至 420 万吨，反映出尽管收成不佳，内陆面粉厂的需求依然稳定。

主句给地位，with 加名词加 doing 补数据，reflecting 解释含义，despite 收一句让步。

Since the customs union admitted three new members last spring, the bloc has accounted for a third of the region's manufacturing output, with its combined port throughput now surpassing that of its northern neighbours.

自去年春天关税同盟接纳三个新成员以来，该集团已占本地区制造业产值的三分之一，其港口总吞吐量如今已超过北方邻国。

with 加名词加 surpassing that of …：用 that 代替前面出现过的名词，比较句因此不重复。

In the face of shrinking reservoirs, the regional government has been compelled to postpone its coal phase-out, with several towns resorting to diesel generators to keep hospitals and water pumps running.

面对水库蓄水不断减少，当地政府被迫推迟淘汰燃煤，几个城镇不得不动用柴油发电机来维持医院和水泵运转。

In the face of 加名词，主句 has been forced to …, with 加名词加 doing 交代具体应对，层层说明压力传导。

Standing on the ridge where two watersheds divide, with the pine forest at my back, a cold stream at my feet and the first lights of the valley below, I finally understood why my grandfather never moved away.

站在分水岭的山脊上——背后是松林，脚下是冰冷的溪水，下方山谷里亮起最初的灯火——我终于明白祖父为什么一生不肯搬走。

分词开头定位，三个 with 独立主格铺开方位，主句落到情感领悟，是游记写景的稳固骨架。

What matters more is that, once a town admits its river was sacrificed for industry, it can combine careful planting, cleaner drainage and plain stubbornness to coax the fish back, season by season.

更重要的是，一个城镇一旦承认自己的河流曾为工业付出代价，就能把精心种植、更清洁的排水和一股倔劲结合起来，一个季节一个季节地把鱼引回来。

What matters more is that 加从句；从句内部用 once 交代前提，句末短语收束，适合反思型结尾。

The new observatory embodies the quiet ambition of a small country whose engineers have learned to build precision instruments from scratch, while reminding us of something easily forgotten: discovery belongs to anyone willing to look up.

这座新天文台体现了一个小国不事张扬的雄心——它的工程师已学会从零开始制造精密仪器；它也提醒我们一件容易忘记的事：发现属于任何愿意抬头仰望的人。

whose 从句展开主体，while reminding 转出普世意义，冒号后一句点题。

For rural clinics, the pressing question is not simply who designs the next diagnostic device, but how its price and instructions can be kept within reach of a village nurse.

对乡村诊所而言，紧迫的问题不只是谁来设计下一款诊断设备，而是如何让它的价格和操作说明都在一名村护士可及的范围内。

not simply who …, but how …：先用 who 提出表层问题，再用 how 把讨论拉回可及性。

The forum gives smaller exporters a collective voice, drawing together countries that, though rivals in some markets, hold one conviction in common: rules written by a few will never serve the many.

该论坛为较小的出口国提供了集体的声音，把那些虽在某些市场上互为竞争者、却共享一个信念的国家聚到一起：由少数人制定的规则永远不会服务于多数人。

that, though …, hold … 把让步插进定语从句，冒号后写出共同信念，长句因此有层次。

Reading through the district's annual school reports, I have little doubt that this literacy goal will be met — in twelve years, no cohort has left primary school without a full set of reading skills.

翻阅该区的学校记录，我几乎不怀疑这一识字目标将会实现——十二年来，没有一个年级的学生在离开小学时还没掌握完整的阅读能力。

分词开头表明依据，I have little doubt that … 表态，破折号后用事实补证。

Letting each workshop keep part of what it saves on fuel, rather than sending every cent back to the ministry, produced the quickest drop in emissions: proof that trust can travel further than a subsidy.

让每个作坊保留一部分燃料节约所得，而不是把每一分钱都上缴部里，带来了排放量的最快下降：这证明信任有时比补贴走得更远。

动名词短语作主语，rather than 引出对照做法，冒号后用名词性短语补充点题，适合写政策或措施的成效。

In an era in which a single video can reach a village classroom overnight, the patience to verify a claim before sharing it may matter as much as the speed of the connection.

在一个一段视频一夜之间就能传进乡村教室的时代，分享前先核实信息的耐心，或许与网络连接的速度同样重要。

In an era in which 先交代大环境，主句用 may matter as much as 比较两件事，可用于议论文开头。

The real value of a school play lies not in the applause at the end, but in teaching a shy child that her voice can carry across a crowded hall.

校园戏剧真正的价值不在于落幕时的掌声，而在于让一个害羞的孩子明白：她的声音能够传遍拥挤的大厅。

the value lies not in..., but in doing... 借否定与肯定并置，把议论推向更深一层。

The river commission has survived three droughts and one border quarrel, largely because of a charter that promotes open data sharing, joint flood warnings, equal voting rights and patient dispute resolution among its six members.

这条河流委员会历经三次干旱和一场边界争端仍能存续，很大程度上得益于一份章程：它倡导六个成员国公开共享数据、联合发布洪水预警、平等行使表决权并耐心解决争端。

a charter that promotes A, B, C and D 用定语从句展开制度内容，适合写组织章程或公约条款。

For decades, whether through sister-city visits or joint disaster drills, the principle that neighbors should share both warnings and resources has been quietly kept alive by ordinary officials.

几十年来，无论是通过友好城市互访还是联合救灾演练，邻国之间应共享预警与资源的理念，一直被普通官员默默维系着。

For decades 先定时间，whether through A or B 并列两条路径，主句说明某种信念延续至今。

The port project shows the way in which foreign expertise, when matched to local labor and anchored by a ten-year maintenance budget, can lift a whole province's shipping trade.

这个港口项目说明：外来技术在与本地劳动力结合、并由十年维护预算托底时，能够带动全省航运贸易。

the way in which 后先插入 when matched 与 anchored by 两个条件，再把 can 加动词放到句末。

The spread of cheap facial-recognition cameras, which can now identify a stranger in a crowd within seconds, has raised the awkward question of how to constrain such tools so that they protect public safety, respect personal privacy and remain subject to independent review.

廉价人脸识别摄像头的普及——如今它们几秒钟内就能在人群中认出陌生人——带来了一个棘手问题：如何约束这类工具，使其保护公共安全、尊重个人信息，并接受独立审查。

主语后用 which 补充背景，再以 has raised the question of how to 引出难题，so that 列出解决标准。

The mayors' forum began as an informal channel for sharing flood maps, comparing repair costs and coordinating rescue crews, the aim of which is to build habits of consultation, pool scarce equipment and speak with one voice during emergencies.

市长论坛最初只是一个非正式途径，用来共享洪水地图、比较修复成本、协调救援队伍；其目的在于养成协商习惯、汇集紧缺设备，并在紧急时刻发出统一声音。

the aim of which is to A, B and C 用非限制性定语从句概括前文机制，适合给倡议或平台下定义。

Such thinking rests on a cramped definition in which partnership amounts to little beyond the absence of open dispute — a 'quiet truce' — that survives only while neither side has anything to gain from leaving.

这种思路建立在一种狭隘的定义之上：伙伴关系不过是没有公开争端而已——一种“安静的休战”——只要双方都无离开的好处，它便能维持。

rest on a definition in which... 用定语从句下定义，破折号补充同义说法，that 从句说明成立条件。

A generation trained to read closely can better grasp the price of a new bypass, the cost of closing a village clinic, and the small routines that no survey records, all of which adds up to a stubborn civic patience that decides how long a difficult reform can survive.

受过细读训练的一代人，更能看清一条新绕城路的代价、关闭一座乡村诊所的成本，以及调查表从不记录的那些日常习惯；这一切汇成一种固执的公民耐心，决定着艰难的改革能坚持多久。

三个宾语并列后接 all of which 总结，再用同位名词加 that 从句收尾，适合写素养的长远影响。